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The Lulamoon Decree by RedApropos The Lulamoon Decree by RedApropos
Some Trixie trolling from our new Twilightlicious princess...

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Made it to EQD, baby!

...Well, it's in the queue, anyway... :3
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It is an enjoyable strip. I like the capturing of the characters. It was a fun read and a fun way of showing the fan ideas of the ponies involved.

The problems come in the amount of dead space in each panel. The same color background for most of them make it hard on the eyes to get any flow from panel to panel. And the sudden shift from vertical blocks to horizontal flow is the only break between them to show any form of sequential art in the comic.

The use of standard word balloons to show the conversation and emotion was well played as is the drop to show the sudden realization. Yet with out any change between the final four you could have just kept the same format and used an ellipsis to pass time.

Summery: Good comic, lots of dead space in the panels. 3/5. Not bad building blocks there. Room for improvement.
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Ok, I loved this. Besides the obvious things about liking the humor, I really liked your outlines, sort of a bold and retro- ish comic style. I thought you did a nice balance between giving Trixie a cute look and giving her lots of readable expressions... am I mistaken, or does Twilight have her "Twilightlicious" face on lol? I disagree with the other poster, I think the spaces in between each panel helped to improve the overall aesthetics of the comic, in that I thought it was easier to differentiate between the different scenes in a very stylish way. As for critique, I thought the background was made up of pretty bland coloration, and I was actually kind of distracted in a paradoxical way thinking, "hey, where is Trixie exactly?" I mean, you don't need to put a detailed background, but maybe u could've used either 1) different colors or 2) a more consistent change of coloration between adjacent scenes, I really think it would've tightened up the visual aspect a bit. Lastly, I really love all your fonts- beautiful, and not so "computer generated" in appearance (another thing I really enjoyed was how hand drawn your comic appears as opposed to all the blatant vectoring I've seen, and yet, very clean lines nonetheless!) All in all, one of the better comics I've seen recently posted on EqD in terms of content and style! ;D
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PinkSpaceBird Featured By Owner 20 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
She's learning from Trollestia
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:iconjoanie297:
Joanie297 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016
AHAHAHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! Thank you for that!
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mrhistorybuff Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2016
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha yes the ha-has have been more than doubled XD
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Anubisisbunagirl1 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Student Artist
lol lol lol get it! Because twilight is not a unicorn anymore, she tells trixie she is more powerful UNICORN than her! At first i was confused but now i get it! Ha! this is great!
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:iconasguardian9000:
asguardian9000 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
Clever, clever flirty girl~ Heheh (ships them I do)
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:iconsweetypie03:
sweetypie03 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
lol:happybounce:

problem trixeEmoticon - Twilight Sparkle Grin 3


trixe:Mlp Doublechin Icon
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:iconrainbowdashie133:
RainbowDashie133 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
-Rd's reaction-
RD:Huh,Twilight looks hot in that pic-I MEAN,um that was a very good prank.
(Lol,I am a Twidash shipper)
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RainbowDashie133 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Lol,For a minute I thought the decree would like blow up,then I remembered that it was from Twilight,when I saw the picture I almost fell out of my chair laughing!
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:iconpuffed-artist:
Puffed-Artist Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2015  Student Digital Artist
XDChibi Trixie Lulamoon Icon Chibi Trixie Lulamoon Icon Chibi Trixie Lulamoon Icon 
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:icondell-ad-productions:
Dell-AD-productions Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Hey, at least some pony appreciates Trixie's talents.
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:iconzanarnaryon:
ZanarNaryon Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Rhaich
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:iconnightwolf574:
NightWolf574 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015
i actually almost pissed myself laughing at this
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:iconirishshift:
Irishshift Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
P.S.
I win!
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:iconnancishurtugal:
NanciShurtugal Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ha! I don't get the hate between these characters, but this is funny!
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:iconfurrykeo:
furrykeo Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Trixie is a cocky little show off, who has managed to alienate herself from every other pony. Long live, wait for it, Pinkie Pie!
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:iconerikajavert:
ErikaJavert Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
Good choice, Trixie.  Never look a horse's gift in the mouth.
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:iconryuuamcff:
ryuuamcff Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la 
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:iconurzapw2000:
urzapw2000 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
I got wings in your face.
in theory its what Trixie wanted, yes?
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:iconlegacy-galaxy:
Legacy-Galaxy Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
Aaaaaaand that's how Trixie was an Alicorn.
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Saphira8199 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
No she's not
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:iconzombiefx:
ZombieFX Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
At least she broke the alicorn news with a cup of sugar :p
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CalypsoTheL0ver Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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BlackHwolf Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
Ha ha! Yes! Trolling Twilight Trolls!
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:iconmlpictures:
mlpictures Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
LOVE IT!:love: 
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:iconiammarrika:
IamMarRika Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I looove your comics <3~
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SnapCentino Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Professional Writer
THe GREAT AND POWERFUL TRRRRRIXIE is okay with this. Yeah, I can buy that.
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Pinkamenapie20 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Troll!!! Doge troll emote Troll lolitrollu :shaketroll: 
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:iconmadovid:
MadOvid Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
"So Trixie what do you think about Twilight being a-|
"I'M OK WITH IT!"
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E-guardias Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Doge troll emote 
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:iconflareonandumbreon:
Flareonandumbreon Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
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DragonKingAlpha Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing. So Trixie's last name is Lulamoon. I've been wondering who had that for a name ever since I heard it in a fan fiction that referred to a character from the show but I never expected it to be Trixie. Then again I might just be jumping to conclusions. 
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SoldierBoyXIII Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
Troll XD
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Thunderbird501 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
oh, The troll is real. Loved this for a good laugh.
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:iconstubb0rne:
Stubb0rne Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my
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theojeca Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
I must admit, even if it's a lil picayune from her... this is kind of her and most likely win.

Approval of this :D
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:iconirish-john:
Irish-John Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Didn't see that coming.
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:icontsubasachronicle19:
tsubasachronicle19 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
she okay with it hahahahaha XD
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:icondrakenhof:
Drakenhof Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
The faithful student of Trollestia
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SpirittheHedgehog333 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wow I read it twice then fell on the floor laughing at it finally getting the joke
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:iconjking1717:
Jking1717 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Trollestia taught her well.
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:iconalphaomega135:
AlphaOmega135 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
TROLL LEVEL: OVER 9000
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:iconflockofmoosen:
FlockOfMoosen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
So Twilight's endorsing a fraud?
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:iconagnesjoey:
agnesjoey Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Artist
twilight: u mad bro?
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:icon9king:
9king Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
funny.
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deli73123 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Genius.
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Rexlare Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
P.S. Like the wings?
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:iconambuwambu:
ambuwambu Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I make a meme using the last panel? If you approve, I'll show you the link in the comments.
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:iconredapropos:
RedApropos Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course you may!
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Like the wings, Trixie? :XD: :XD: :XD:
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DoubleBMan13 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
Troll 
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