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The Lulamoon Decree by RedApropos The Lulamoon Decree by RedApropos
Some Trixie trolling from our new Twilightlicious princess...

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Made it to EQD, baby!

...Well, it's in the queue, anyway... :3
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:iconvixenchan:
It is an enjoyable strip. I like the capturing of the characters. It was a fun read and a fun way of showing the fan ideas of the ponies involved.

The problems come in the amount of dead space in each panel. The same color background for most of them make it hard on the eyes to get any flow from panel to panel. And the sudden shift from vertical blocks to horizontal flow is the only break between them to show any form of sequential art in the comic.

The use of standard word balloons to show the conversation and emotion was well played as is the drop to show the sudden realization. Yet with out any change between the final four you could have just kept the same format and used an ellipsis to pass time.

Summery: Good comic, lots of dead space in the panels. 3/5. Not bad building blocks there. Room for improvement.
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Ok, I loved this. Besides the obvious things about liking the humor, I really liked your outlines, sort of a bold and retro- ish comic style. I thought you did a nice balance between giving Trixie a cute look and giving her lots of readable expressions... am I mistaken, or does Twilight have her "Twilightlicious" face on lol? I disagree with the other poster, I think the spaces in between each panel helped to improve the overall aesthetics of the comic, in that I thought it was easier to differentiate between the different scenes in a very stylish way. As for critique, I thought the background was made up of pretty bland coloration, and I was actually kind of distracted in a paradoxical way thinking, "hey, where is Trixie exactly?" I mean, you don't need to put a detailed background, but maybe u could've used either 1) different colors or 2) a more consistent change of coloration between adjacent scenes, I really think it would've tightened up the visual aspect a bit. Lastly, I really love all your fonts- beautiful, and not so "computer generated" in appearance (another thing I really enjoyed was how hand drawn your comic appears as opposed to all the blatant vectoring I've seen, and yet, very clean lines nonetheless!) All in all, one of the better comics I've seen recently posted on EqD in terms of content and style! ;D
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:iconirishshift:
Irishshift Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
P.S.
I win!
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:iconnancishurtugal:
NanciShurtugal Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
ha! I don't get the hate between these characters, but this is funny!
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:iconerikajavert:
ErikaJavert Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
Good choice, Trixie.  Never look a horse's gift in the mouth.
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:iconryuuamcff:
ryuuamcff Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la 
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:iconurzapw2000:
urzapw2000 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
I got wings in your face.
in theory its what Trixie wanted, yes?
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:iconjustinitforcomments:
JustInItForComments Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
Aaaaaaand that's how Trixie was an Alicorn.
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:iconsaphira8199:
Saphira8199 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
No she's not
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:iconzombiefx:
ZombieFX Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
At least she broke the alicorn news with a cup of sugar :p
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Calypso399 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
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:iconblackhwolf:
BlackHwolf Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
Ha ha! Yes! Trolling Twilight Trolls!
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:iconmlpictures:
mlpictures Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
LOVE IT!:love: 
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:iconiammarrika:
IamMarRika Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I looove your comics <3~
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:iconsnapcentino:
SnapCentino Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Professional Writer
THe GREAT AND POWERFUL TRRRRRIXIE is okay with this. Yeah, I can buy that.
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:iconpinkamenapie20:
Pinkamenapie20 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Troll!!! Doge troll emote Troll lolitrollu :shaketroll: 
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:iconmadovid:
MadOvid Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
"So Trixie what do you think about Twilight being a-|
"I'M OK WITH IT!"
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:icone-guardias:
E-guardias Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Doge troll emote 
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:iconflareonandumbreon:
Flareonandumbreon Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
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:icondragonking17:
Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing. So Trixie's last name is Lulamoon. I've been wondering who had that for a name ever since I heard it in a fan fiction that referred to a character from the show but I never expected it to be Trixie. Then again I might just be jumping to conclusions. 
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:iconsoldierboyxiii:
SoldierBoyXIII Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
Troll XD
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:iconthunderbird501:
Thunderbird501 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
oh, The troll is real. Loved this for a good laugh.
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:iconshatteredluna:
ShatteredLuna Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oh my
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:icontheojeca:
theojeca Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
I must admit, even if it's a lil picayune from her... this is kind of her and most likely win.

Approval of this :D
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:iconirish-john:
Irish-John Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Didn't see that coming.
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:icontsubasachronicle19:
tsubasachronicle19 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
she okay with it hahahahaha XD
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:icondrakenhof:
Drakenhof Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
The faithful student of Trollestia
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:iconspiritthehedgehog333:
SpirittheHedgehog333 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wow I read it twice then fell on the floor laughing at it finally getting the joke
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:iconjking1717:
Jking1717 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Trollestia taught her well.
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:iconalphaomega135:
AlphaOmega135 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
TROLL LEVEL: OVER 9000
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:iconflockofmoosen:
FlockOfMoosen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
So Twilight's endorsing a fraud?
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:iconagnesjoey:
agnesjoey Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Artist
twilight: u mad bro?
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:icon9king:
9king Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
funny.
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:icondeli73123:
deli73123 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Genius.
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:iconrexlare:
Rexlare Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
P.S. Like the wings?
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:iconambuwambu:
ambuwambu Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I make a meme using the last panel? If you approve, I'll show you the link in the comments.
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:iconredapropos:
RedApropos Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course you may!
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Like the wings, Trixie? :XD: :XD: :XD:
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:icondoublebman13:
DoubleBMan13 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
Troll 
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:iconstargazeclipse:
STARGAZECLIPSE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
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:iconx-toxicpastei-x:
x-ToxicPasteI-x Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student General Artist
:icontrollfaceplz:
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:iconaquaandrozesrpbud:
AquaandRozesrpbud Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
too
lazy
to
critique
this
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Twilight finds the funniest ways to exact revenge on her enemies....
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:iconpokemonlegend999:
pokemonlegend999 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ealy she is most powerful since twilight is an alicorn.
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:iconsally-wants-to-play:
Sally-Wants-To-Play Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
Did by one else freak out that Applebloom sang her 'licious' song in in Pinkie Apple?
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think BlackGryph0n did...and so did I...and my family...and...you know what, screw it. Everyone did.
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:iconsally-wants-to-play:
Sally-Wants-To-Play Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Glad I'm not alone. ^^ ]]
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me too.
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:iconchaudstarpower:
ChaudStarpower Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
hahahahaha nice
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
and no bucks where given

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:iconindustrialcomics:
IndustrialComics Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
"I'm the T to the W-I-L-I-G-H-T!  And ain't no other pony trolling down like me!  I'm Twilightlicious!"

This is so flippin hilarious!  Three solid laughs out of this one!  Count em, three!
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:iconrexlare:
Rexlare Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Paybacks a b**ch aint it Lulamoon?
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