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The Lulamoon Decree by RedApropos The Lulamoon Decree by RedApropos
Some Trixie trolling from our new Twilightlicious princess...

-----ALSO-------

Made it to EQD, baby!

...Well, it's in the queue, anyway... :3
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:iconvixenchan:
It is an enjoyable strip. I like the capturing of the characters. It was a fun read and a fun way of showing the fan ideas of the ponies involved.

The problems come in the amount of dead space in each panel. The same color background for most of them make it hard on the eyes to get any flow from panel to panel. And the sudden shift from vertical blocks to horizontal flow is the only break between them to show any form of sequential art in the comic.

The use of standard word balloons to show the conversation and emotion was well played as is the drop to show the sudden realization. Yet with out any change between the final four you could have just kept the same format and used an ellipsis to pass time.

Summery: Good comic, lots of dead space in the panels. 3/5. Not bad building blocks there. Room for improvement.
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Ok, I loved this. Besides the obvious things about liking the humor, I really liked your outlines, sort of a bold and retro- ish comic style. I thought you did a nice balance between giving Trixie a cute look and giving her lots of readable expressions... am I mistaken, or does Twilight have her "Twilightlicious" face on lol? I disagree with the other poster, I think the spaces in between each panel helped to improve the overall aesthetics of the comic, in that I thought it was easier to differentiate between the different scenes in a very stylish way. As for critique, I thought the background was made up of pretty bland coloration, and I was actually kind of distracted in a paradoxical way thinking, "hey, where is Trixie exactly?" I mean, you don't need to put a detailed background, but maybe u could've used either 1) different colors or 2) a more consistent change of coloration between adjacent scenes, I really think it would've tightened up the visual aspect a bit. Lastly, I really love all your fonts- beautiful, and not so "computer generated" in appearance (another thing I really enjoyed was how hand drawn your comic appears as opposed to all the blatant vectoring I've seen, and yet, very clean lines nonetheless!) All in all, one of the better comics I've seen recently posted on EqD in terms of content and style! ;D
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:iconiammarrika:
IamMarRika Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I looove your comics <3~
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:iconsnapcentino:
SnapCentino Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THe GREAT AND POWERFUL TRRRRRIXIE is okay with this. Yeah, I can buy that.
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:iconpinkamenapie20:
Pinkamenapie20 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Troll!!! Doge troll emote Troll lolitrollu :shaketroll: 
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:iconmadovid:
MadOvid Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
"So Trixie what do you think about Twilight being a-|
"I'M OK WITH IT!"
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:icone-guardias:
E-guardias Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Doge troll emote 
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:iconflareonandumbreon:
Flareonandumbreon Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
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:icondragonking17:
Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing. So Trixie's last name is Lulamoon. I've been wondering who had that for a name ever since I heard it in a fan fiction that referred to a character from the show but I never expected it to be Trixie. Then again I might just be jumping to conclusions. 
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:iconsoldierboyxiii:
SoldierBoyXIII Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
Troll XD
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:iconthunderbird501:
Thunderbird501 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
oh, The troll is real. Loved this for a good laugh.
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:icondarknessluna:
DarknessLuna Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oh my
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:icontheojeca:
theojeca Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
I must admit, even if it's a lil picayune from her... this is kind of her and most likely win.

Approval of this :D
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:icondrunkcarl101:
drunkcarl101 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Didn't see that coming.
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:icontsubasachronicle19:
tsubasachronicle19 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
she okay with it hahahahaha XD
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:icondrakenhof:
Drakenhof Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
The faithful student of Trollestia
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:iconspiritthehedgehog333:
SpirittheHedgehog333 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wow I read it twice then fell on the floor laughing at it finally getting the joke
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:iconjking1717:
Jking1717 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Trollestia taught her well.
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:iconalphaomega135:
AlphaOmega135 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
TROLL LEVEL: OVER 9000
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:iconflockofmoosen:
FlockOfMoosen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
So Twilight's endorsing a fraud?
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:iconagnesjoey:
agnesjoey Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Artist
twilight: u mad bro?
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:icon9king:
9king Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
funny.
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:icondeli73123:
deli73123 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Genius.
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:iconrexlare:
Rexlare Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
P.S. Like the wings?
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:iconambuwambu:
ambuwambu Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I make a meme using the last panel? If you approve, I'll show you the link in the comments.
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:iconredapropos:
RedApropos Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course you may!
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Like the wings, Trixie? :XD: :XD: :XD:
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:icondoublebman13:
DoubleBMan13 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
Troll 
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:iconstargazeclipse:
STARGAZECLIPSE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
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:iconx-toxicpastei-x:
x-ToxicPasteI-x Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student General Artist
:icontrollfaceplz:
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:iconaquaandrozesrpbud:
AquaandRozesrpbud Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
too
lazy
to
critique
this
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Twilight finds the funniest ways to exact revenge on her enemies....
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:iconpokemonlegend999:
pokemonlegend999 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ealy she is most powerful since twilight is an alicorn.
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:iconsally-wants-to-play:
Sally-Wants-To-Play Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
Did by one else freak out that Applebloom sang her 'licious' song in in Pinkie Apple?
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think BlackGryph0n did...and so did I...and my family...and...you know what, screw it. Everyone did.
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:iconsally-wants-to-play:
Sally-Wants-To-Play Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Glad I'm not alone. ^^ ]]
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me too.
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:iconchaudstarpower:
ChaudStarpower Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
hahahahaha nice
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
and no bucks where given

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:icontimartstudio:
timartstudio Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
"I'm the T to the W-I-L-I-G-H-T!  And ain't no other pony trolling down like me!  I'm Twilightlicious!"

This is so flippin hilarious!  Three solid laughs out of this one!  Count em, three!
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:iconrexlare:
Rexlare Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Paybacks a b**ch aint it Lulamoon?
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:iconpinkraindrops03:
pinkraindrops03 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I love this XD
Revenge from Twilight by niceness xD
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:iconstarstreak96:
StarStreak96 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
This is my personal favorite of your comics. I loled hard the first time I saw it.
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:icondowlphin:
Dowlphin Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

7th panel cracked me up. You can hardly get any more teasing. You could have expanded that panel and ended the comic there.

The fact that Trixie was the one who once held the "Alicorn Amulet" only adds to the trolling.

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:iconfierce-dities-link:
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
Love it! It's both sweet and humorous! XD
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:iconjoebrony:
JoeBrony Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
Hahahahahaha! Good one :D
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:icontruecere:
truecere Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i would be too
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:iconskrillexxfh:
SkrillexxFH Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The last names is when I start getting pissed. off by my firmed who likes to freaking punch me.
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:iconhighrollerhydra:
HighRollerHydra Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I think you're still more Great and Powerful-er than Twilight! :hug:
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:iconthatbronywithglasses:
ThatBronyWithGlasses Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
Umm... Sombra, Starswirl, Sunset Shimmer, EVERY UNICORN IN CELESTIA'S ACADEMY!
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:iconveralidainewildmage:
VeralidaineWildmage Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
So bra went poof, Starswirl might be dead (MIGHT BE), and Sunset is still in the human world. As for the rest... Yeah, i guess you're right.
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:iconthatbronywithglasses:
ThatBronyWithGlasses Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Writer
Sorry, its just Trixie (as far as we know) lacks any formal training. I refuse to believe she entertains for a moment that Twilight is the only one in her way. (Although, she is a good milestone, being top of her class)
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