Every detail looks perfect, the lines are clean and the emotions are expressed sans raideur. The muffins I like to great extent, as they add an extra touch to the picture... Which for derpy is a big part of the identity. Your use of balance as one muffin is eaten craves attention but does not call attention to the fact. The art is capturing emotion and dialogue that leaves the words to only explain it twice. One thing I would have done differently is the text, Because it is a lighter color with a thin font. Overall a wonderful piece, and a new personal favorite! -SP-
Cute. I like how the lines are smooth and the colors well put together. The only thing that I would change is how you did the text. Prehaps a bit curlier font? I just think that it would make the picture a little more elaborate.