Well, finished it for me. This is his submission here xhazxmatx.deviantart.com/art/I… but he gave me permission to post it in my gallery after he did.
"I just hope that I did it justice" he says.
Is that a joke?
IT'S MARVELOUS! Beautiful!! I could never have done such a fantastic job!!
Critiques are encouraged, but bear in mind most of the critique goes to xHaZxMaTx
Um...no? We're serious here? Okay...
Right in the feels
as luna wept in isolation upon the moon, Celestia suffered a fate worse. celestia would not be alone those thosuand years. yet those she loved, those she befriended, those she spent that millenium with to ease the pain of her sin all suffered the same curse, the same gift.
and every inevitable gravestone, be it ally, friend, favorite backer, or student, she stood alone, mourned alone, without the comfort of another who knew the curse, and gift, of her enduring life to ease her pain.
Honestly, the tale of the Sisters is one of my favorite elements of FiM. Such a deep story expressed so simply.
There is a element most don't think about ever. I don't actually think Nightmare Moon was truly evil, don't get me wrong what she was going to do would have been terrible. But I don't think Luna or Nightmare Moon was fully evil.
Notice when she first appeared she defeated the guards without a second thought, and barely used her magic.
Then she set simple ways of dealing with the ponies, which were at best more of a test than anything else.
If anything I think she wanted to be beaten, or at least have some fun. Not fully sure though.
Though in a slight after thought, what would have happened if Twilight had tried to explain and help Nightmare Moon rather than use the elements on her.