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Some time ago, someone suggested I draw a comic with Pinkie Pie and Rarity.
Here it is!

...PINKIE AND RARITY HAVEN'T HAD AN EPISODE TOGETHER. THIS NEEDS TO CHANGE.

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Because there's a frightening number of people who don't get the joke:

Rair' - "What do you think this place is?"
Pinks - "Carousel Boutique."
Rair' - "Yeah, well, you're treating it like the spa."

Except Pinkie said she thought it was the spa.
She knew what Rarity was going to say, and said it first.
She was being a smartass.

Welcome to the world of humour that doesn't involve pony memes!
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:icondiscommunicated:
This piece here is another comic I find myself, enjoying mindlessly with no real objection to, however I didn't understand the message or joke of this comic, I assumed it was that Rarity went to the spa after hearing the word spa, but I can't be too sure, it confused me quite a bit, although the originality is impressive because I haven't seen too many Rarity and Pinkie comics to my knowledge this is the first I have seen . the technique is as always what I expect from the artist, good style that is something good to look at as well as being something of his own quality, I may not get the joke of this or message and it may not have had a heavy impact, but it doesn't mean I didn't like it I actually enjoyed reading this comic, it was well designed.
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:iconwaffle911:
Funny. The punchline hit me at just about the same moment Rarity got to her "I see what you did there and we are not amused" srs bsns face. Pinky obviously cheated and read the next panel for the right answer before responding to the question in the previous one.

Vision: An actually original Pinky Pie Hijinks comic. It's been done before, but it's hard at this point to really pull off the "original" part.

Originality: Which you totally nailed. You have Pinkie interacting with Rarity, which by your own observation, happens about as often as Rainbow Dash out-nerding Twilight Sparkle. Add to that a gag I've actually never before seen (I'm sure it's been done before in some other medium, but if it has, I've never seen it), and you have a recipe for something fresh.

Technique: Hand-drawn, complete with wavy-thick-outline-hand-drawn feel. Not a bad thing at all. Borrowing existing background vectors where needed? Fair game. There's just one thing that's niggling me. Pinkie's position in those first two panels just doesn't visually read well; she looks like a pile of pink blobbiness like Lumpy Space Princess or something. I can't really make out what's supposed to be going on there.

Impact: Not much left to say. It's a comic, so the impact is in how well the dialogue comes together with the visuals. While I got the joke as intended without reading the description, and I think using Rarity as part of the delivery for Pinkie's antics was a solid choice, it's clear the joke was still lost on some, so perhaps it was a bit too subtly executed. While I'm usually pretty good at figuring out and offering some helpful tips to remedy shortcomings, I'm really left scratching my head for want of ways the delivery could be improved so it isn't so hit-or-miss that you end up having to explain it in the description.
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:iconnyarx:
Nyarx Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
Pinkie and Rarity had a Joseph Joestar moment!
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:iconzanarnaryon:
ZanarNaryon Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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:icongrinderkiller1:
grinderkiller1 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015
The Spa Obviously.......TO-YOU!
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:iconninjahamster5:
Ninjahamster5 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Burn XD
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:iconpawprint1343:
PawPrint1343 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015   Filmographer
It took me like ten buckin' minutes!
Excuse my French~
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:icondell-ad-productions:
Dell-AD-productions Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha, I get it!
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:iconawetrofasun:
Awetrofasun Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
Can you tell me? Because i don't understand
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:icondell-ad-productions:
Dell-AD-productions Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Didn't you read the description?
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:iconcalypso399:
Calypso399 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
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:iconheardofrvb:
heardofrvb Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
Of course. PINKIE'S A JOJO!
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:iconzzshabihzz:
ZzShabihzZ Featured By Owner Edited Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why does Pinkie look like a pregnant amputee in the first two panels?
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:iconmelodysweettunes:
MelodySweetTunes Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
Pinkies not pregnant, that is just her thigh, making her look fat...
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:iconcrystalgem48:
crystalgem48 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Student Artist
i dont get it
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:icondavidcurser:
DavidCurser Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014
I dont get it
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:iconam-i-fluffy-pony:
am-i-fluffy-pony Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
same:iconderpyshrugplz:
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:iconenvirotech:
Envirotech Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
That laughing Pinkie Pie in the final panel XD hehe   Great artwork I really like the style!! And all those Raarity expressions. hehe I loove seeing when Raarity goes a bit insane
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:icondardig90:
dardig90 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
The change in Rarity's face is fantastic! This made my day
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:iconk3nj1ma3da:
K3NJ1MA3DA Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ha! Rarity had been "Pinkie'd" (The new prank show with your host, Pinkie Pie)
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:iconhyperactivechaosgirl:
HyperactiveChaosgirl Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ha ha ha Pinkie you are such a troll xD
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:iconal-kpon:
Al-Kpon Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And what episode contain the original joke ?
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:iconlurose98:
LuRose98 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Oh yes I love raripie. I really hope they get an episode together in season 5
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:iconxxpinkflyerxx:
xXPinkflyerXx Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They wont make a Mare x Mare couple in a kids show.
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:iconlurose98:
LuRose98 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 25, 2015
I mean they have an episode where Rarity and Pinkie are the focus. Like Fall Weather Friends where it was AJ and Rainbow. Or Green isn't your color with Rarity and Fluttershy. Or Feeling Pinkie Keen with Twilight and Pinkie. And even if that wasn't what I meant, what's wrong with having a lesbian couple on a kids show? Good Luck Charlie featured one in an episode.
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:iconxxpinkflyerxx:
xXPinkflyerXx Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Which one :/
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:iconlurose98:
LuRose98 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015
One of their later episodes. I think it's called "Down a Tree"
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:iconagufanatic98:
Agufanatic98 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, so awesome. the concept is so simple but so funny all the same!
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:iconthedaveyognaut:
THEDaveYognaut Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think I thought Rarity's store was something else.
something
celestia would be into.
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:iconunknownalicorn:
UnknownAlicorn Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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:icongeoice:
geoice Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
ahhahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhaahh
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:iconkivaholotitan:
KivaHoloTitan Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
I don't get it.
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:iconfermhreisatum:
Fermhreisatum Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Me neither
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:iconscourgethecatlove:
Scourgethecatlove Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
Did you read the description?
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:iconbroneko:
BroNeko Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Well then
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:iconihamza995:
ihamza995 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Comes after month to read
Still doesn't gets it!
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:iconclassicblaze:
ClassicBlaze Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
I honestly didn't get it before I read the description...
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:iconmylittleprimo:
MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
Thanks for the Patrick's Staycation flashback.
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:iconabi-sain:
Abi-Sain Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
It is suprisingly difficult to outwit Pinkie Pie.
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:iconninjahamster5:
Ninjahamster5 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Rarity just got served X3
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:iconspasticpug:
Spasticpug Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pinkies best ponie
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:icon9king:
9king Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I like the ending where shes thrown out of the panel
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:iconkatrueyumenikki:
KatrueYumeNikki Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
didn't got it
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:iconich-hab-sauergurken:
Ich-hab-sauergurken Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Pinkie Pie expected Rarity's retort before she said it, so she decided to be a smartass and say it first. Seriously, it's explained right there in the description...
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:iconkatrueyumenikki:
KatrueYumeNikki Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry if i didn't read the description. absolutely no need to be rude
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:iconmichaelgs-0148:
MichaelGS-0148 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
You didn't read the description?
You must be a YouTuber!
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:iconkatrueyumenikki:
KatrueYumeNikki Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the hell?
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:iconnellzdablackking:
NellzDaBlackKing Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
He's saying you must the large percentage of frequent YouTube users who comments on stuff that is said in the description, but constantly fails to read it and someone who has read it has to answer your question and tell you to read it or say something similar to "Description is your best friend". It's a repeated process that gets annoying. The lesson is, read the description please before commenting any questions. (And this is me not being rude by the way)
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:iconkatrueyumenikki:
KatrueYumeNikki Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ugh, i just don't keep reading descriptions because most of times they are USELESS and a WASTE OF TIME to read. JUST SAYING.
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:iconnellzdablackking:
NellzDaBlackKing Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
:iconhueyfreemanplz: On average, (if you're a good reader), it wastes about 10 to 15 seconds on your time, and considering you're on the Internet cruising around in the first place, you was already wasting time. Just saying.
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RunningWolf26 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Professional Writer
Does "Putting Your Hoof Down" Count???

I mean I know it was predominantly about Fluttershy, but Rarity and Pinkie Pie were paired up for the episode
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RedApropos Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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