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March 26, 2013
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Fix by RedApropos Fix by RedApropos
And that night, Twilight wrote a letter to Celestia.

You can't fix what isn't broken. Instead, it was Twilight's own perspective that our little Derpy Hooves helped fix. :D



- I would like to point out that you are, indeed, looking at Princess Twilight. Look, you can even see her wings.
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I really really really really really really really really really really really really really love this! (Sorry for all the 'reallys', I'm trying to put more words becasue of the 100 - word minimum). FINALLY, a comic that says Derpy is fine just the way she is!!! I love how Twilight realizes the same, and how she's smiling and getting teary in the last few panels. Derpy looks best being wall - eyed, in my opinion, and I guess Derpy thinks so too. ^_^ They're both awesome ponies, awesome comic, and awesome idea. Thank you for making this awesome piece of awesomeness!!! :iconderpylaplz: :icontwilightlaplz: :iconderpylaplz: :icontwilightlaplz: :iconderpylaplz: :icontwilightlaplz: :iconderpylaplz: :icontwilightlaplz:
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To emphasize how amazing this comic is, I'd like to say that this made me make a "dawww" folder just so I could put this in it.
Anyway, Critique. Yes, that thing:
The idea of "fixing" Derpy (especially her eyes) isn't anything really new. BUT, the way you presented it is certainly something I haven't seen done before, not as a censor, but as a compassion meant in good will. As far as art goes, it's pretty basic, but it fits really well. Derpy looks adorably derpy, Twilight looks fine, even if looks a bit wonky in some of the details. The change of the background color is clever, and the use of comic effects (Movement lines and laughter) are really nice, and make it fell a bit more interesting where the scenes would look a bit empty.
In all, I really like it. In terms of how professionall it looks, I'd only give it a 3.5. The take on the concept is pretty original, so I'll give that a 4. The design you used is really fitting, and adds on to the impression. It could've been a little more cleaned up in spots, but it's really good. Almost a five, I'll give it. Impact: Like I said before, so many dawwwwwws, and it's really nice how portrayed the situation. Since this is now a pretty old concept, the message feels a little stale, I'll be completely honest. But they way you projected it in this fashion makes it really touching, with Derpy being accepting of herself and showing others that there's nothing wrong with who she is. 4.5. Almost 5.
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Leon-Z Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014
dammit! my heart! DX!!!
tyruvelp Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
and warning - might steal the context - gonna hopefully put togethere a comic / animatic about derpy (i just VERY lazy lol)
stupidtai Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
:iconslowclapplz: this is why I love derpy
W4t3rf1r3 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Derpy Clapping Icon Derpy Clapping Icon Derpy Clapping Icon 
SilverGriffinflare Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Derpy!!!!!!!!!!!! She's just so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XatLenore Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Ok I cried.... 
HTF-Invader96 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student Artist
Aww, well that's sweet. ^^
Magic-Dream-Pony Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So cute!
PitchBlackTheCat Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Aw, Derpy!
mlp-and-smLunaLover Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Aw, thats so sweet that my eye are moist now. Derpy, please don't ever stop being the unusual and adorable pony you are!
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