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Dat Element by RedApropos Dat Element by RedApropos
Celestia's just lol'n at the Honesty.
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Doin' this step by step:

~Artwork and technique: you did a great job on both Celestia and Applejack! It's easy to see that in the third and fourth panel it's filly AJ, though you only drew her a bit smaller and gave her round eyes. That does need some training, I assume.

~Use of colours and text: nice how you gave Celestia and AJ both different text styles. It.. 'adds' something to the comic. Sort of a final touch.
The colours are great, the background colours fit perfectly with the comic and hay, you even got the colours of Celestia's mane right!
Only thing I can think of that could-have-been-better are the backgrounds. It's kinda simple. But it also fits with the comic, so it's not a big deal.

~The story itself: very nice. This is something you don't think about every day, and Celestia+AJ-comics are rare.
The fourth panel really made me laugh out loud, it's also something I imagine Applejack doing in the show.
The way you made AJ speak is also quite fitting. "Land sakes! You're HUUUUUUGE!"

I'd say a 5/5, really. It's been a while since I saw a comic this awesome.
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Lol. I'm still laughing at this. A very original idea, never seen another comic dealing with their thoughts on their elements, or how the princess knew who they were. But, to the critique. This was a very cute comic, and you have comedy down well. The drawing is great, and I just love how filly Jack looks. (Dem freckles XD) Celestia looks great, and the flashback part of AJ reacting to her, well, larger than normal size is very cute and funny. "Land sakes! You're Huuuuuuuuge!" Rotflmao keep up the good work, I'll have to keep an eye out for more of your comics.
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KaiNekodesu Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
I thoroughly enjoyed this. 
kharmatika Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think my favorite part of this is that everyone has done this at least once as a kid. Just blurted out, OMG look how tall that guy is, or Mooooom, why is that man bald?
Krazzulimaii Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Old comic, but you pulled off the kid face perfectly in the second last panel
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That 4th panel... :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
SnapCentino Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can't hold it in.

Sallitha Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, I guess if you were a filly sitting next to her you'll think she's huge also XD
Tiger610 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:33< i am just like that
:33< i have asperger and i am very honest (sometimes too honest according to my mom)
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PonyGalz Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
:iconsendhertothemoonplz: I am da hugest
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