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An Unexpected Visitor by RedApropos An Unexpected Visitor by RedApropos
She'll have to live the rest of her life knowing that everyone will think she's crazy if she ever told anyone.

I'm drawing a lot of Twilight comics.
Because I like Twilight a lot.

This is based off something Bill Murray did.

-------------PLEASE NOTE, COMMENTERS--------

No, it was not Discord disguised as Star Swirl.
It wasn't ANYONE disguised as Star Swirl.
It was ACTUALLY Star Swirl.

If there was a legitimate explanation to how this happened, it would be infinitely less funny. Otherwise, I would have given an explanation.

Got it? Actually Star Swirl.

...I really hope he gets introduced in the show...
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AWESOME! I like how you had Star Swirl the Bearded wand Twilight just gawking over him. But it would be nice if you added some crazy thought of the old paranoia Twilight Sparkle. I miss the old Twi.
Dat face tho. She was just flabbergasted and such. It would have been hilarious if she had a small nosebleed.
And by the way, what did cause the possible hallucination? Was it Discord or a troll?
I did not mean to be mean, it's my first critique ever.
One of you best pieces RedApropos, really.
His mouth was not moving, creepy as f*** though.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
214 out of 238 deviants thought this was fair.

Vision - Pretty good, I really enjoyed it. You are definitely getting the point across to your viewers.

Originality - Decent, I have seen a lot of other comic like style art like this, but overall it is all your own :D.

Technique - Flawless, it looks amazing in my opinion, there isn't anything that I would change to it. It is visually appealing to the eye, and I'm a pretty harsh critic, so you did a fabulous job.

Impact - This is pretty self explanatory, your watchers seemed to like it, and I would love to see more stuff like this in the future, no matter what fandom it comes from.
What do you think?
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ZiddersRoofurry Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So Starswirl is Bill Murray? Headcanon accepted. 
SuperJordanBlast Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
This makes me hate start swirl
cory0brennan Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  New Deviant
Remarkable comic:D
SStories Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well she DID get a visit from herself from the future, and everypony believed her sooooooo...
afega2000 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Never meet our heroes. -__-
Neytirislover51 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
brony3099 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 16, 2016
Very true.
AskTheSonicCrew Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
 this stupid my friend told me to repost this WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will poop, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she pooped her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to poop all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to make her poop, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
toiler they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she exploded.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and poops you slowly, by farting on you
and watching you cry to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your toilet, pooping and farting.
Cocoabear777 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
"...I really hope he gets introduced in the show..."

I mean doesn't EVERYBODY?! Someday... someday he hopefully will my friends...

*Cries in a corner*
TheUnseenWorld Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015
Chadbane Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015
Ha! No one would believe her, eh? What if she swiped the cup he used for his saliva and compared it to DNA found in the actual Star Swirl the Bearded Wizard hat they have in Canterlot Museum? Checkmate, Starswirl!
UnicornMoxie Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2015
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 y
Celestia-is-Bestia Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015  New Deviant
((Spammy spam, gotta love the spam! :P))
UnicornMoxie Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015
Sorry I didn't mean to upset anyone
nyanpheonix101 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015
Star swirl the bearded is now the new doctor who
Anubisisbunagirl1 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015  New Deviant Student Artist
lol! So cool! I ma making a comic kind of like this! so check my account out! :D
GryphonStar5678 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
So Starswirl is Random and he is a troll. Yep, this proves he is Discord.
TheSisters2 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL! ;P Love it! :D :huggle: :heart:-Kay
Talis687 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2015  New Deviant
Obviously didn't get that book soon enough
BinaryHedgehog Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Star swirl:I drink your... MILKSHAKE! I DRINK IT UP!
tokyofox200 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015
Theory confirmed; Time travel spells can be used to troll someone or somepony in this case! 
urzapw2000 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016
even better, time travel spells can be used to troll yourself!!
tokyofox200 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016
I suppose that is true enough but not sure if the troller would enjoy it as they live mostly to troll other people.
urzapw2000 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016
kknkbaker Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
somercet Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2015
This is the Bill Murray urban "legend."
rainbowdash10124 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015  Student Artist
rude much?
Corporal-Chaordic Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015
Well, he did know time travel spells, so -technically- he could do that.
Bubbubob Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015
Troll doesn't even begin to describe what he just did.
TheUnseenWorld Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015
So he's santa o__o
Sneshneeorfa Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*slow clap*
Delirious-Artist Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2015  Student General Artist
RedWingsDragon Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2015
... Star swirl the murry.
legoking44 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015  Student General Artist
Seems legit
Dragonjek Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Celestia and Luna met him and know how much of a jerk he is.

Betcha they'd believe her.
trecegato Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2015
He what happen?
Luckbeccafan Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Great comic
Drakei Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
seems right....    lOl
BowtiesAreCool15 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I love this so much xD
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
That is so perfect! XD
Twilight, Get the DNA from the sandwiches and/or cup! Prove hime wrong! XD
CrystalTwilight9010 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I like to read all these little comics! :3
SharonMusica Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually in the diary of the two sister, starswirl does use a time travel spell....
BronyShadowSage Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tell Tia because She might remember Star swirl doing something like this in the past. or discord is being discord. 
Applez17 Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Did Star Swirl not see Twilight's an ALICORN princess?? LOL
StardusttArts Featured By Owner May 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The book she's reading is Avoiding Stupid Fanon...
NanciShurtugal Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I totally thought he was Gandalf pony X-P 
therealnightmaremoon Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MightyMorphinPower4 Featured By Owner May 4, 2015
hahaha funny one
ErikaJavert Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
Admit it everypony - if you were wizard, this is exactly what you'd do too.  (I know I would.)
ryuuamcff Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
Oh, YES! this would be awesome to have in Season 5!
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